Young gun

I'll take a chance at guessing this with few interpretations. From the overall perspective the poem seemed to be about the wrong choice of the narrator in her friend/lover. If ...

The imagery and the underlying meaning in stanza one was really nice and well thought of. The poem has great subtlety I think i might have understood the underlying meaning ...

I must say you have a great style of writing.The first stanza was enough to convince anyone that you were writing with great subtlety.The story was also really simple......with no ...

Hey...nice poem their which has great potential for improvement.Here are some points you would probably like to work on. Use correct punctuation.Don't forget to insert the full stops and commas ...

The poem had a certain kind of spirit it till the end.I never lost interest for a single moment. I liked the way you showed the readers in the poem ...

You really have to explain what is stopping this prodigy's chance of success? How exactly does reality foil his chances?Is he just a dreamer or does he have real talent? ...

A very deep and moving poem there.The emotions especially,were captured very well. I used to dream of living here forever back when I was younger and didn't know any better. ...

Parts of your poem were like deja vu to me because it resembled something i wrote........only difference being........much better and very well expanded. I could totally understand how the narrator ...

Really the approach of a practical person shown in your poem.You really are pointing out to the fact that we should stand up against all the contradicting nonsense going on ...

Hey........amazing work there.You kept very simple and straightforward.I could quite understand the situation of the lonely boy and I guess every one at some point of time in their life ...

Hi. That was a simple,touching and very effective poem.You really moved at the right pace for the reader.Great determination to stay positive on part of the narrator and its really ...

Wow..........you pretty much covered every aspect possible in that essay on your own.Anyways.....I"ll put forward some of my own thoughts: Many times marriages can end in divorce due to the ...

Good idea............. but it seems that you have just put a random thought over here. You should put in more effort next time and expand on your poem. tell what ...

Great work there.Death is something I write about in some of my poems so i could really identify with this one. I liked the comparison of death to the unknown ...

I really didn't understand the title till I read the second stanza.If the girl is really intended to be depicted blind then the poem suddenly becomes very clear on a ...